very nice i like it

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This would be great colored! I like it a lot!

As it is now, it flows very nicely and it isn't too cluttered to the eye.

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Terrific sketch.

you gave ed too much height compare to roy. XD
awesome action in the picture.

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thats so awesome! i really like your style!!!!

Man, nice dynamic (as usual) but what happened to the anatomy and perspective thinking dude?

The metal-dude has wierd foreshortening which could stand alone as is but if he's supposed to be rushing for the flame-dude then it's way off. These look like 2 separate images put together in one pic. I think the flame dude needs to go back and his view changed so it looks like he's actually attacking the metal-dude.
Also, the metal-dude's head and neck are off. Way too elongated to be style. The top half of his body also doesn't look like it belongs to the bottom half.
I think the flame-dude is overly well done except for placement. It really looks like he is closer to the p.o.v. than the metal-dude is which offsets the whole "vs." thing.

I'm not trying to be harsh or anything but if this is to be your Otakon print, you wanna show off your true skills which is better than this sketch. Please fix these problems early on so people won't be mislead.

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Great pic all and all but going along with what spikeblack said they dont seem to b interacting the flame dudes eye line dont seem to be pointing to the metal guy and the metal guys neck is too thick at the base of the ear and his left leg seems to b contorted in a weird possition also cutting off the foot at the ankle is a no no u should always try to avoid cropping at the joints just takes away form the pic and its just not a very good design, other then that great job as usual ur pencils skillz r supurv and the poseing is excellent I exspecially like the fire dudes pose very dynamic.

Awesome man, i love the poses and clean drawings, great stuff man! Cant wait to see it colored! `XD

the onnly crit i have is that maybe the head of the guy on the left is just a bit big. oh well, might just be me. Keep it up! XD

reminds me of the anime all right! ^_^ Good job!